I am now working on Alice in Less Wiicked Land as a long linear poem that will be short on narration.
More depth and less events!?
It is about her relationship with the tall thin man
The porcupine, midget theif, and green haired bus driver woman are not needed.
They did give me an idea about the fictional reality of Less Wicked Land.
Wonderland was easier since Lewis Carrol had done that place alrwady.
A problem with Less Wicked Land is Alice does not want to be here and gets really creeped out by it. It being no place for sweet little girls from a country town.
Alice begins to feel like the country mouse before a day is done.
It is about her relationship with the tall thin man
The porcupine, midget theif, and green haired bus driver woman are not needed.
They did give me an idea about the fictional reality of Less Wicked Land.
Wonderland was easier since Lewis Carrol had done that place alrwady.
A problem with Less Wicked Land is Alice does not want to be here and gets really creeped out by it. It being no place for sweet little girls from a country town.
Alice begins to feel like the country mouse before a day is done.